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The heart, wild and dark,
Grieves approaching death, yet graves
Are peaceful places.

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This is me, forgetmenot. When I reread the above haiku, I didn't like what I termed the "sound balance". I am posting a different version below. The heart, wild and dark, Grieves death, yet cemeteries Are peaceful places.

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Submitted on : Dec 22,2008 3:41:32 am

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Voted : I'm neutral
This is me, forgetmenot. When I reread the above haiku, I didn't like what I termed the "sound balance". I am posting a different version below.

The heart, wild and dark,
Grieves death, yet cemeteries
Are peaceful places.

by forgetmenot [+]

I always believe that poems should rhyme.

by Les6Hithe6Wins6Again [+]

Voted : I love it
When can we expect you to be published?

(saying this while choking on own words, being unpublished myself)

by Truthseeker013 [+]

Voted : I love it
Makes me think.

by mojo [+]

Voted : I like it
Yes, yes I do.

by wildcard [+]