DO YOU LIKE MY NEW HAIKU POEM?

best : DO YOU LIKE MY NEW HAIKU POEM?

[+] serious ballot by forgetmenot

The heart, wild and dark,
Grieves approaching death, yet graves
Are peaceful places.

I love it
I like it
I'm neutral
I hate it
It's DISGUSTING

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COMMENTS:
Voted : I'm neutral
This is me, forgetmenot. When I reread the above haiku, I didn't like what I termed the "sound balance". I am posting a different version below.

The heart, wild and dark,
Grieves death, yet cemeteries
Are peaceful places.

by forgetmenot [+]

I always believe that poems should rhyme.

by Les6Hithe6Wins6Again [+]

Voted : I love it
When can we expect you to be published?

(saying this while choking on own words, being unpublished myself)

by Truthseeker013 [+]

Voted : I love it
Makes me think.

by mojo [+]

Voted : I like it
Yes, yes I do.

by wildcard [+]